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Tuesday, March 17, 2020

   Hello readers throughout the past Mt Tr Ts Ht and Cb have            been doing research on aotearoa/new Zealand's history.

                 Maori population in the late 18s 60-70 thousand 
                
                      The major causes of World War II                                             were numerous. They include the                                         impact of the Treaty of Versailles following WWI,                      the worldwide economic                                                          depression, failure of appeasement, the rise of                         militarism in Germany and                                                     japan, and the failure of the League of Nations.

                      In 1642, Dutch navigator Abel Tasman                                   became the first European to discover the                              South Pacific island group that later became                          known as New Zealand. ... Whalers,                                      missionaries, and traders followed, and in 1840                      Britain formally annexed the islands and                                   established New Zealand's first permanent                          European settlement at Wellington.
                      



2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Kelesi
    It's good that you have completed a blog post. You have copied some information about the history of Aotearoa, but some of your information is incorrect so you need to edit this please.
    In the late 1830s the Maori population of New Zealand was 70,000-80,000.
    We only looked at Maori land wars, so the whole paragraph starting with 'The major causes' needs to be removed. It seems that you have copied both that paragraph and the last paragraph from the internet and not put it in your own words. The last paragraph is useful, but needs to be written in your own words.
    Mrs Hastie

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  2. Good work kelesi. I like the amount of work you have done, but you need to put it in your own words

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